I love the immediacy of first person, the way I feel like I'm in the room or the car with you. This is a deep dive into honest introspection. How common it is for parents to become less vigilant when they are older, when their youngest children reach adolescence. Thanks for sharing this excellent work!
I love the immediacy of first person, the way I feel like I'm in the room or the car with you. This is a deep dive into honest introspection. How common it is for parents to become less vigilant when they are older, when their youngest children reach adolescence. Thanks for sharing this excellent work!
I love how confident your voice is here. The tension is rich, with a sense of a story yet to come...
Great read. Bad habits are like a virus. It spreads from person to person and runs a course depending on the individual.